Laney
December 2009
Mt. Gilead, Illinois
"The police came for me in the middle of the night. Two officers: one tall and slope-shouldered, the other big-bellied. They walked into the Walmart where I worked, and after speaking to the shift supervisor, they came to my register and the tall one said, "You're Elaine Volk, aren't you? We asked you a few questions once before. Remember?" Of course I remembered. Questions about where I was on a certain morning in May. Home, asleep, I'd told them, and No, I didn't hear any shots. Now a few customers who had been about to push their carts to my checkout line were hesitating. I gave them a grin in hopes that they'd think everything was all right, but I knew it wasn't. I said to the officers, "I'm Laney." My voice sounded strange to me, too loud for my soft-spoken nature. I was the sort most folks didn't give a second look - a scrawny thing with short curly hair, a nothing kind of girl with no hips to speak of and arms and legs as thin as ropes. I looked like I might turn to dust, which is what I wished I could have done just then. I was nineteen, and as I stood there waiting to see what was going to happen next, I felt how far I was from the girl I'd always been."
Break the Skin by Lee Martin
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14 comments:
I read this one some time ago, and think I enjoyed it. I remember bits and pieces of that intro - keep reading.
That's a great opener ... I'd keep reading.
Yes, I would keep reading, it really does sound interesting, grabbed my attention.
Wow, now I'm definitely curious about where this story is going...thanks for sharing.
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Sounds good!
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Very alluring! You really get a sense that she's hiding something big and you want to know what.
Intriguing! I'd love to read this book!
Definitely makes you wonder what will happen next. My teaser: Night’s Darkest Embrace
Definitely liked the opening!
Wow - great way to start a story. Makes me want to know more about this girl.
Sounds good and I really like this cover!
The writing is really evocative. I'd keep going. Here's Mine
I would so keep reading this one...sounds intriguing!
I've got this one on my shelves and I'm really looking forward to reading it. I can't wait to hear what you think when you finish!
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